where it begins

 This is where the story begins please enjoy

Good bye 

I no longer wish to live in a world without her she was what made me a better person and now she's gone 

God is a crule guy to take her yours truely jake handson 

 

He puts the rope around his neck and kicked the stool that he was standing on and when he almost passed out of and pulled into the great beond he saw a shadow of a woman. Now now jakey the shadow said in a loving tone. That sounds like jane he thinks  its not your time yet my dear I miss you just as much as you miss me I won't leave you even if the world trys to rip us apart please please please don't forget the times that we had. she says as she cuts me down and holds me to her. Jane  I'm sorry please stay with me I-i love you jake begs i have never left your side she says with a smile I close my eyes to wake up in the hostpital w-where am i ? Jake asks your in the hostpital his mom says jake you tried to kill yourself she says in tears what happened? Why didn't I die he asks someone found you and called for help they stayed with you until they got here then a shadow was seen leaving your home the older lady says mom it was jane jane saved me jake says. Honey jane died last week his mother says as if she lost a daughter but but she talked to me and she told me things jane knew.... maybe it was her spirt protecting the man she loved a nurse said. What? Like she's my angle that's stupid jake says no not really everyone has someone to protect and guide them if they loved the person or they have a bind to said person they can not leave and I see a young woman about 22 tallish long  dark brown hair and dark brown eyes they hold a great pain with them but still over flowing with kindness and love and understanding the nurse says 

DOES SHE LOOK LIKE THIS the older lady says as she pulls out her phone yes thats her wait wait she's showing me how you see her now and before she died the nurse says oh was she in car crash cuz nows she is all messed up like this the older woman asks as she pulls out a photo of jane the day she died yeah oh my she's stunning the nurse said what the mother and son asks she she showed me her life before  the nuse says with tears in her eyes and she says then is off 

 two years later 

Reviews

[kangsora]

This is good but the punctuation is kind of confusing. i'm sorry i'm just saying please don't take it the wrong way. Have a good day.

[the happy pickle]

Thank you for your help I'm sorry I will try to do better. I understand if you don't read anymore. Truth be told I'm just getting this out there so this story will leave my head alone. I have a hard time getting what is in my head out of my head to make people understand