Dreams Colors

i think this also counts as a story, my poems never come out really sounding like poems -.-; sorry

I dream of happiness
   sadness
   anger
   and frustration.
It's so interesting,
   the colors i get in these dreams.
Sadness, frustration and anger,
   their colors are similar and most common
   in my dreams.

I was dreaming recently.
It started with a fragile pink and a sunny orange,
   and i knew it was a happy dream.
It was strange for me to be seeing pink and orange together,
   so i was a little hesitant and unwilling at first
   to accept the happy colors being together in my dream.
And then the colors blossomed in front of me
   like happy flowers, and I was elated to see them together
   in my dream of all places.
I smiled when I dreamt of the happy colors.
I couldn't stop smiling when I,
   the awkward bruise-purple color,
   was with these colors in my dreams.
I thought it couldn't get any better than this;
   it was such a happy dream that seemed to last forever.
Then, without warning, the dream exploded from the fragile pink,
   and there was almost nothing left.
The fragile pink lay in pieces,
   and the sunny orange knelt next to it
   scared and frustrated.
I stood next to the two of them,
   and realized that this was going to happen,
   that fragile pink was going to burst eventually.
Is this all my fault? I kept thinking, and I panicked.
SNAP!
My eyes open and I'm in my room,
   heavy breathing,
   cold sweat,
   there's nothing there but me.
I sit up slowly,
   shaking all over.
Just a dream,
   telling me of the reality of this world.

Author's Note

meh. something stupid and incredibly...BLAGH! happened the other day x.x; my world is full of psychos.

Reviews

[Sseoni]

What a wonderfully intriguing poem! I loved it! So emotional and beautiful! I loved your choice of wording and details! Amazing poem! What a colorful poem! Lol! :D

[Wolfwind Words]

i found this piece facinating, as how you use colors to portray different aspects of social society and the emotions that run through.

I may not agree with the social view. But this piece definantly makes one think!

Good Ink!
Aaron Maycroft

[San Herman Lopez a.k.a...]

Cuz the world is full of psychos, but we few clear in thought must keep it leveled... Very well written I really enjoyed it. Keep it up!

[Seracies]

I liked the voice of your poem, it felt real and a little cynical. I also liked how abstract it was, I felt that I could relate. Nice poem.