Just One More

quick poem that i came up with just out of the blue

Just One More

 

One more touch,

one more squeeze.

One more kiss before I leave

Author's Note

when i said quick, i MEANT quick. XD i'm going to make a story based off of it sooner or later. funny how thinking randomly can turn into something like this x3

Reviews

[James Takeo Panton]

short and sweet, keep it up!

[djeehc09]

... I'm disappointed; I didn't know you literally meant you would put that snippet up as a poem!! But yeh, STORY NOW!! or POEM LONGER!!

[Adventerous Amy]

well it rhymes................................................wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[alternative_be]

Strong but powerful!