All the Stupid People

yes, i finally decided to rant on stupid people, POEM STYLE XD

I look around me and i see

idiots

they're all so annoyingly

idiots

 

when they say "i won't do this! it's not cool!"

i wonder and think

why aren't you on a dunce stool?!

it makes me want to chuck a brick at you

 

they laugh at me reading and writing

and i want to stab that damn pen in their eye

they don't know how much farther i'll be getting

and i'll know the answer when they ask, "why did all my dreams die?"

 

when some of these girls say "i'm gong to be something big"

i wonder what kind they mean

and later, when their souls break like a twig

i'll be the one who has the only hard exterior that goes "SHEEEEEN!!!" *it's hard and shiny!!*

 

so for all you annoying idiots

stop being idiots

otherwise when you find out you were idiots and i wasn't

you'll wish strangely that we were friends >.>;

Author's Note

O.o i tried very hard to rhyme but my vocabulary is very limited XD i wish i had a better short term memory. i'd remember all the really good fancy words and use those.

Reviews

[djeehc09]

XD that's neat. About your vocab; I don't think that's quite as important. The creativity in writing comes from communicating a message in all meaning to a wide range of readers. You are talking about idiots, and I understand that you are talking about idiots; job well done... and it's funny too^^.

[James Takeo Panton]

Keeping it simple and to the point....I think it is very honestly written...

[oranges_melt]

oo i like it!

[Poeticpiers]

You don't need polysyllabic words to rhyme M'lady But a good vocabulary only comes with time and practice. Good poetry relies on meter more than rhyme to make it flow when spoken aloud
Keep on writing and reading good poetry