All the Stupid People

yes, i finally decided to rant on stupid people, POEM STYLE XD

I look around me and i see

idiots

they're all so annoyingly

idiots

 

when they say "i won't do this! it's not cool!"

i wonder and think

why aren't you on a dunce stool?!

it makes me want to chuck a brick at you

 

they laugh at me reading and writing

and i want to stab that damn pen in their eye

they don't know how much farther i'll be getting

and i'll know the answer when they ask, "why did all my dreams die?"

 

when some of these girls say "i'm gong to be something big"

i wonder what kind they mean

and later, when their souls break like a twig

i'll be the one who has the only hard exterior that goes "SHEEEEEN!!!" *it's hard and shiny!!*

 

so for all you annoying idiots

stop being idiots

otherwise when you find out you were idiots and i wasn't

you'll wish strangely that we were friends >.>;

Author's Note

O.o i tried very hard to rhyme but my vocabulary is very limited XD i wish i had a better short term memory. i'd remember all the really good fancy words and use those.

Reviews

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Awsome! I still get a kick out of it, lol. You did good, don't need a big vocab to say what you want to say.

This is a great poem! I thought it was funny. I love the third stanza! There have been a few people I would love to stab in the eye. Great poem!

[shadadakiya]

well i thought it was funny and cute and just telling the truth good craft

[~D.A. Phoenix~]

"they laugh at me reading and writing

and i want to stab that damn pen in their eye"

I know how that feels. i go through it every day.

"so for all you annoying idiots

stop being idiots

otherwise when you find out you were idiots and i wasn't

you'll wish strangely that we were friends >.>;"

Yea that'll happen when i graduate. lol

Nothing like a good rant. Nice work. keep it up

[Sally Edwards]

I like this it stikes me as a very honest piece from the heart and that is great, the ryhming will come with practise, not so keen on the pen stabbing bit though :)

[poetdweller]

thats exactly feel about idiots... i love to read and write a ton too... i liked the stabbing them in the eye with ur pen part.. it made me laugh...XD

[Lauren Burch]

this is really funny. Idiots get on my nerves too. Kudos on getting the fact that you're a writer in there too.. almost like a ninja writer. :)

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This was really good. Simple sometimes is better than fancy. I loved it. It made me think of all the stupied people I know.

[Adventerous Amy]

But that was amazing fancy words or not that truly was exellent!!!!!;-)))))))))))))))))))))))))))

[Star-Runner]

I like this and believe me the world is full of idiots they are everywhere, Like your write.