Wishes

Spur of the moment, feeling a little gloomy, just a sudden release I need to do.

It was as if I was there, and I was thinking of sitting together with you while you watch those vivid colors spread through out the sky. But then, as the rain poured down on us, I saw you with someone else, sharing that wonderful time of your life, smiling, forgetting of whatever existence I had placed upon this earth which smelt of nostalgia. I wish I was the one sitting beside you, or I wish I didn't know of it at all. My hands are open waiting for some warmth for it to hold unto, but I realize that everything that I am wishing for will come a century late. It is very ironic that as I kept track of the time I spend and the way I always do things a minute early would be paid back with everything I wish for arriving when I've already left.

Reviews

[Su' Nacnetaf]

Short stories are a favorite of mine, in this story the main character�s voice seems to be speaking of deception. IT makes me ponder however, why does the character feels everything will be paid after he/she has left. Truly emotional, this story is very good. Maybe you could try to make a slightly longer version in the future, let us know bit more about your characters. Good writing.

[Sseoni]

I found this to be a very interesting short story! Very emotional and though provoking as well. The main character is very interesting because of the way he or she looks upon the world. A very amusing and well written short story! :D