life

A Poem by thegoldenone

Holding on to anything, I can reach

My hand stands out to feel the cool air hit it tender skin

But no feeling no life

I suck in air to get nothing in return im still suffocating

I shove my head above water still no help im still drowning

Still I don’t live

I scrape at the coffin that I am 6 feet under in

Dieing

I have no help

I have no life

Until u come along

You pull me out

You clear my lungs

Now I have u

Now im alive

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you forgot commas.
but this is deep.
I dnt intend to die anytime soon..lol.
I can sleep over this weekend rite?

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Added on June 9, 2008

i like to write im weird and i have interisting writings more..

fix me

peace

frozen heat