Is my heart actually fixed?

Is my heart actually fixed?

A Poem by The Fatal Lover
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Um... I have no idea actually... lol xD

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My heart may beat every second
But my mind does not agree

That it might actually be beating
After all the pain it has been through

With the way men broke it
And how family tore it to shreds

Yet lately it seems to beat
Faster then it ever has before

Maybe because I am truly in love
Or all the wounds finally healed

No matter what actually happened
I'm just glad that it is finally fixed

By: Elly

© 2011 The Fatal Lover


Author's Note

The Fatal Lover
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A simplistic but wonderful view on the process of healing after wounds have been deeply laid. Nicely done.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This poem is deep. I am glad your heart is fixed! Mine however is not just yet...:/

Posted 13 Years Ago


There is definitely a deep sense of metaphores in this poem. I'm glad it has a satisfiying ending too.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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