He said he loved me....

He said he loved me....

A Poem by The Fatal Lover

I don't know what this is about
But I needed something to write
My heart is hurting badly
While tears fall from my cheeks

He said that he loved me
Then says he needs to clear all emotion
So now i'm really confused
About what is going with us

I love him more then anything
Now I am wondering what is real
Cause I can't do this love thing again
If I get my heart shattered more

By: Elly

© 2010 The Fatal Lover


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You'll be ok. We've all been there.

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow, this speaks the heart with prominent poetic design and that to me
is the amazing feature most visible, the emotional quality has a real and
sincere focus that allows the reader to fully visualize what is being
expressed with a sense of heart ache that defines outlook on future
relationships in general is what this poem expresses imo,
youve done an awsome job on this, keep it up.


Posted 13 Years Ago



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