He said he loved me....

I don't know what this is about

But I needed something to write

My heart is hurting badly

While tears fall from my cheeks

He said that he loved me

Then says he needs to clear all emotion

So now i'm really confused

About what is going with us

I love him more then anything

Now I am wondering what is real

Cause I can't do this love thing again

If I get my heart shattered more

By: Elly

Reviews

[ShaneBerry]

i know what you mean Elly. my Kayla said the big three words as well, but then decided she wanted to wait. i was very confused. we must be strong and resolute. let them know that you love him, (and i love her) even if they are not ready. i hope this helped :) great write, and remember, even if you do not know why you are writing, writing is a good therapy. and is easier on the wallet as well!! lol.

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[Rose Tyler]

It will come again.. Give it time though. I can definitely relate.

[Solitary Dreamer]

I understand exactly how you feel... I am going through a heartbreak too...But just know you can message me anytime and talk 2 me anytime

[Aggie Skeleton]

That's very sad but also very good and thoughtful. Nice work.

[HorrorMaster]

Aww very cute

[heich]

hmmmnn..it makes me think..

[VincentRayne]

If I found someone who loved me with such a passion I would find it very hard to let go. It's hard to find a person with such dedication today and to let it go by is not right. Really good description and I could feel the emotion flowing from the page.

[The Water Queen]

The heart is such a fragile thing. This is a very stunning poem. Great work.

[David W Moore III]

High risk, high return. Yes the pain is incredible, but when it's right...
Nicely written.

[.quan.011.]

This is a nice peom and you will be fine he just need some time to think.