Why do I like you

Why do I like you

A Poem by The Fatal Lover

I keep going back to you
Yet you break my heart again
And I have no idea why

My feelings for you are strong
But you don't seem to care
About my love for you

What is there that you don't like
About my body or self
When your perfect for me

You use to make me laugh
And then I fell for you again
With you making me cry as usual

So what do I do now
I'm hurting in my heart
And the tears won't stop falling.

By: Essentia

© 2010 The Fatal Lover


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The Fatal Lover
I have no idea....

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its a cute poem..i guess you just have to add soemthings that might spice it up..a rhyme would be cool..

Posted 14 Years Ago



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