If You

If I were to vanish
Would you even notice?

If someone killed me
Would you revenge me?

If death took me away
Would you come looking?

If I was in a car accident
Would you take care of me?

If I said I loved you
Would you love me back?

If someone else had me
Would you wait for me to return?

By: Essentia

Author's Note

Um. I was sad when I wrote this. Hope you like it. =)

Reviews

[Rose Tyler]

This was excellent! I loved it!

[Randomgurl6ify]

I love it!!!!

[Marlena]

I like it, but you should add in those question marks. Loose grammar in poems like this irks me, and I think your tone would be clearer and emotions would be, too, if you fixed it. Otherwise, nice work. :)

[Kiddx]

hmm! these are good questions. real honest emotions.

[salvador (camuel choisu..]

I would do all