If You

If I were to vanish
Would you even notice?

If someone killed me
Would you revenge me?

If death took me away
Would you come looking?

If I was in a car accident
Would you take care of me?

If I said I loved you
Would you love me back?

If someone else had me
Would you wait for me to return?

By: Essentia

Author's Note

Um. I was sad when I wrote this. Hope you like it. =)

Reviews

[Solitary Dreamer]

Sad... but I like it!:)

[Aggie Skeleton]

Sad, and sweet.

[Legion]

You raise a lot of questions here. Interesting piece, but I am curious to see what you can do if you spread your wings a bit. Try writing about other topics besides heartbreak, angst, and love and see where it takes you. The path might surprise you.

[VincentRayne]

Nice poem. I like the questioning. It is a perfect reflection of a person's mind as we are always asking questions whether we realize it or not.

[SameInThe End]

not very good...questions r a sign of immaturity...coz like nobodies gunna answer u

[HorrorMaster]

very emotional and lovely.

[ShaneBerry]

very emotional, and seriouse

[NCSsworld]

i can tell very heart felt :)

[heich]

love the title and everything about it..

[La3uren]

luv it so gud