When time froze in one moment
A Poem by
The Fatal Lover
When I looked up at the entrance I saw you standing near by And at the very moment Time seemed to freeze for a second My heart started racing And my mind wished you would talk Wondering if you even saw me Looking towards your face But then you just walked on by Like I did not even exist Now wondering what may have happened If you had seen my standing there Would we have talked like old times Or yelled at me for stupid actions Well I will never know Since you just kept on walking. By: Essentia
© 2010 The Fatal Lover
Author's Note
Saw my ex today. Now I wonder why.
Reviews
I hate my ex's. I know this feeling, I hate it 2.
Posted 14 Years Ago
Aww im sorry, give you a hug. Very good poem
Posted 14 Years Ago
Aww im sorry, give you a hug. Very good poem
Sometimes stuff like that just happens for no reason and you kind of just have to go with it, you know? Good poem :)
Posted 14 Years Ago
Sometimes stuff like that just happens for no reason and you kind of just have to go with it, you know? Good poem :)
Everything happens for a reason and almost every time we will never understand why. Good job, well written.
Posted 14 Years Ago
Everything happens for a reason and almost every time we will never understand why. Good job, well written.
Well don't worry if he left that his loss not yours!
Posted 14 Years Ago
Well don't worry if he left that his loss not yours!
great poem! :)
Posted 14 Years Ago
great poem! :)
i'm sorry to hear that, but it all happens for a reason though we never find out why. great poem.
Posted 14 Years Ago
i'm sorry to hear that, but it all happens for a reason though we never find out why. great poem.
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Added on June 29, 2010
Last Updated on June 29, 2010
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The Fatal Lover Tucson, AZ
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