Of All The Names

Of All The Names

A Poem by The Fatal Lover

Of all these names I am called
Being called a b***h hurts
Especially when they call me annoying

It hurts my heart so much
And makes me cry more then anything
Wondering  why they even think this

So now time shall end here
Maybe I should forget those names
Wishing things were different

Why do people call me these names
Like all these things of life
This is the worse I have ever felt

By: Essentia

© 2010 The Fatal Lover


Author's Note

The Fatal Lover
Just words from my mind.

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Stick and stones will break my bones but words will often kill me.

Emotionally the meaning behind a word and how it's said contributes to how it is received.

Some of the most powerful weapons have been words, they have the ability to start wars, to change laws, to bring wealth and fortune.

Some times you got to know when to let water flow off the duck's back.

As for your poem it flowed well for half of it and then just sort of fell out of place. Your choice of words is good and the poem makes the reader connect to the feelings going through your mind.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Who dares call you that i know you and you age not annoying at all.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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