Falling for you....

I fell for you. But you broke my heart. Thanks a lot.

Things were amazing
Now they mean nothing
Cause I really liked you
But you broke my heart

I hope that your happy
For doing this to me
Making me happy
And destroying it all

Hoping you were real
And telling me the truth
But it was all lies
So go leave me alone.

Your no longer important
After all that you have done
So hope your happy now
For breaking my heart.

By: Essentia

Author's Note

Thanks for breaking my heart my vampyre prince....

Reviews

[Aggie Skeleton]

Beware of Princes, they can be charming.

[Kanattas Atir Enomo]

he didn't mean to...im probably late in saying this, but he really didn't. anyways...this was a really nice poem. the message was clear and full of emotion and it was pretty well-written, although a few times you said "your" instead of "you're" and that killed me a little bit. it flowed well and it was just overall really good. it sounded to me a bit like a rant, though some of the best pieces of writing are so. ^_^ i agree with Wolf in Somewhereland. though i guess some of us never learn...

[blob blob]

so somber-but such beautiful poetry...
"Your no longer important
After all that you have done
So hope your happy now
For breaking my heart...."
...i love this Essentia...

J:)

[Solitary Dreamer]

I know exactly how this feels! But it made you write a great poem!:D

[Rose Tyler]

This made me very sad to read. I know how you feel in this poem. I've had my heart broken many times and it makes me sad t see someone else who has gotten hurt as well. A broken heart sometimes cannot be fixed unless the right person comes along to fix it for you. But if they do come, trust with caution because you never want to wholly trust someone, else you may end up hurt once more. And the pain just keeps getting worse. So lesson is: Never trust someone with your heart completely, they have all of the power to break you again.

This was written well with much emotion put behind it and has a nice flow. Keep it up.

[salvador (camuel choisu..]

IT BROKE MY HEART TO READ YOU SAY LEAVE ME NOW

[DeadToTheWorld]

Liz..we need to talk message me please ^-^