My Guardian Angel

I wrote this poem to go along with the picture. Hope you like it. =) And I took the picture. =)

Watching over me every day
Making sure things are well
But once in a long while
He will show himself in the clouds
Letting me know that he is there
To keep me safe from death
Still letting me feel love and pain
Yet since I know he is here
Life is so much easier for me
Having him keep a loving eye on me
Knowing that he keeps me alive
To finish my work on earth
But when my time finally comes
He will help me up to heaven
To live with him forever

By: Essenita

Author's Note

Hope you like it. Please review. =)

Reviews

[Kanattas Atir Enomo]

I do rather like this. It does flow nicely and it rather well-written. i like the message in this and i feel that it was conveyed clearly, so good job.

[Ł σ s s σ ғ Ł α �..]

This piece is very well written. Sometimes it is difficult to have the poem flow to an ending, but you did well.

[Frantzuu]

great poem there :D

[Warick Ten Bohmer]

I find it ironic that I've an angel in my display picture as I write this review. I don't believe in Guardian Angels, but then again I don't believe in many things. If I were to believe in them, the one in this poem sounds like it would be worth believing in.

Well written, I think the image might be more epic without the tree or whatever it is on the right hand side sort of getting in the way.

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"life is so much easier for me
Having him keep a loving eye on me"
...wonderful--such positivity here!!!
...a great poem!!!

J:)

[Rose Tyler]

The picture and poem are simply astounding! EXCELLENT!
The poem has a nice flow to it and the words chocies are great!