Cyber Or Real

Cyber Or Real

A Poem by The Fatal Lover
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Um well. I will tell if you ask. lol

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On this wonderful night
I talked with a man
Who made me feel amazing

Things happened on camera
Now what will go on
He lives far from me

If I could go there
I wonder what might happen
Or if things will be over

Liking him is normal
But that is all I can do
Since he is not near me

Wishing I could just fly
And meet him in real
To see what happens

So what happens now
After all that fun
We will never know

By: Esssentia

© 2010 The Fatal Lover


Author's Note

The Fatal Lover
Um Confused

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Hehehe...i liked the way you told us you were confused, and then asked us to review the poem, lol.

I've had a similiar dilemma recently where you find you connect sooo well with someone, in the online world, you start to share too much with them. All of a sudden there's a big feeling of Ooops.

Nice poem

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like it it makes you think and about what is amazing about him

Posted 14 Years Ago


Makes one have to think, no?
I lliked reading this poem and and it made me think of what you meant when you wrote it. It did confuse me at first but I read it and reread it again and I think I have found some sence in this nonsense of a poem.
Is it about finding a love and never knowing what will happen because you will never see/talk to each other again due to distance? That is just my view. It seems they had taken pictures to capture the moments they shared. :) Also, by reading it once more, it seems they have not even met in real life?

Posted 14 Years Ago


O_o I'm not even sure how to review this poem

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on June 23, 2010
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