Forever His

Forever His

A Poem by The Fatal Lover
"

Was thinking about my one true love.

"
No matter what other people say
You will always be my true love
Even though you might not think so
That is what I think and always will.

I love you more then anyone else
My heart skips a beat when we talk
You make me feel like something special
But with these feelings all around.

If I could stop time for a second
I would do that in a heart beat
To spend more time with you
Would be all I can ask for.

Maybe someday things shall work out
But until then I will wait for you
For things to all settle down
So that we can be together once more.

This may take a long time
To wait for your love
But I am willing too
No matter the length.

By: Essentia

© 2010 The Fatal Lover


Author's Note

The Fatal Lover
I wrote this for a guy that I love. And hope to be with him again someday. Hope you enjoy it. =)

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Nicely done; I only found 1 flaw:
"That may take a very long time.
But I'm willing to wait
To be in your arms forever
Is a price I will pay with waiting."
It seems a little akward to read this last stanza. Maybe you could fix the wording?
All in all a good piece.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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