There tears of love

I was crying and thinking about love.

With only tears
On my face
Flowing all down
To the ground
Making me hurt
And feel pain
Also forgetting him
His sweet love
And his touch
Wishing for love
To Be Real
What went wrong
To our life
Why did this
Have to happen
If I knew
I might smile
But I don't
Well now here
Things shall end
Forget his face
And his love
Please move on
And just smile
Be truly happy
Like long ago
When I loved
Time to go
Goodbye my love
Love you forever
Phillip my love
One and only
Breaker of hearts

Author's Note

Just words I wrote after the guy I loved. Made me cry and told me to move on. Hope you like it.

Reviews

[Rose Tyler]

This made me sad to read. It had a bit of flow to it, but if you added punctuation it may have better flow. Just a thought.
Good piece,
Keep it up!

[salvador (camuel choisu..]

Poetry like this can never be said that it is great cause the poem, passion and pain that happened in order to create such a great work speaks for itself.

[DeadToTheWorld]

this was a true great write it is always hard to let someone go when you don't want too :) this was an extraordinary write :) I love love love it ^-^