Safar

Alfaazon ke lahze itne mayne rakhte hain,
jis ki wajah se insaan dil me utar jaata hai yaa to dil se utar jata hai

Reviews

[Aradhana]

Words are weapon words are the cure... sahi kaha janab..bohot khub..hume bhi sikhaiye kaise kar lete h itni achi shayari....hum toh fan ho gaye apki shayri ke....

[Dilshad Ahmad]

Sukriya Aradhana
Pta nhi jab bhi kuch likhne ko dil karta khud ba khud kalam chalne lagte hain

[Dilshad Ahmad]

Sukriya jo aapne mujhe is qaabil samjha

[Aradhana]

Kalam bohot powerful hoti h kisi toh badshah toh kisi ko fakir banane ki takat rakhti h... Ise istemal karna sab ki bas ki baat nhi... Isme toh likhne vale haato ka bhi aehem hissa h...

[Sharda]

Zindagi ke safar mein dil me utar ne wala insaan zyada mayen rakhta hain

My urdu is not very good, but I liked the couplet