Do You Even Know Me?

Truth...

You say the love in your heart

Could only belong to me.

But do you even know

The girl that I used to be? (And am.)

Do you care that I have been beaten?

Did you know my soul was raped?

Do you even care to know

That my home is but a cage?

How many brothers do I have?

Ever asked their names?

Do I like my coffee with cream?

Or do I like it plain?

You should know all sorts of things

That I bet you can't recall…

You say you know me well,

But I don't think you do at all…

I found myself in this love,

With both feet firmly planted

And here I am balancing

On a hill that's mostly slanted.

I don't need your words this week

You've said enough already.

I need for you to show

That your love for me is steady.

 

...Open your eyes lover and try to see

The me that is ME, the real ME…

And not the me you assume me to be...

Reviews

[Caleb Benton]

Leslie, I wish the rest of the world could see you as I do. You are more of an inspiration to me than you could ever imagine. And I know how many brothers you have!!!

[cigale]

Wonderful. Very imaginative and flows nicely.

This happens far to often. You have addressed it beautifully.

Thanks for this!

[.matt_]

I love your writing. I tend to build an imaginative atmosphere in my mind that goes along with the writings of others. You poems flow with beauty and beautiful torment... like a Quentin Tarantino film done really well.

[Lyrical Love]

This is a powerful write of COURAGE!!!
Many say that they are in love, but do they REALLY know
what love is...
Awesome and very well worded piece.
Kudos!

[Kenna]

This is very forward, and I like it. It totally fits with the content. Your rhyme scheme is good, and the rhythm is steady. Nice job!

[THE LOST ROSE]

Again another piece. I plan on sharing this great write. The build up to the actual confrontation kept me wanting more. I was cheering "tell it like it is". I look forward to visiting the rest of your collection.