Handwritten Love notes #18

Handwritten Love notes #18

A Poem by thdbldee
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I fully intend to flood this site with poetry over the next 24 hours. Finally a place with (hopefully) constructive criticism! Thanks!

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I am made of flaws
like patchwork mosaic
on exposed brick walls
I crack, I break, I crumble
fall quite to pieces at 
the slightest rumble
You are menders glue
filling for the faults 
where the wind blows through
You strengthen, you secure, you heal
with hands that rebuild 
and words that heal.

© 2013 thdbldee


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I was just commenting back on one of my posts about handwriting and how the pen and paper are becoming obsolete.. I love this and the photo writing is fantastic. glad I saw this one pop up in the feed. shallimarRose

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like this one c:
it's pretty good
Better than what I can do~

Posted 11 Years Ago



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thdbldee
thdbldee

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