Foolish

When the world teaches us to look at the materialistic side of beings I learnt to see a human for it's soul!

While you chose to add to my insecurities,

My choice still is, smile, over those jokes.

You? Can only please, bodies, not a soul!

Amidst variables, trust, loyalty are my folks.

Believing in efforts, old school much?!

You wanted me to focus on your physique,

Foolish to think, I'd fall, for skin and muscle.

It's in the eyes, hiding, beyond the hustle!

Alas! I forgot, how can you ever know,

The disciple of 'standard bodies', the 'cults'

Hypocrites, 'steroid truth'- tops the show! 

Welcome to the world of false perfections,

Where beauty is seen, in plastic sections!!

Author's Note

Open to criticism cause I wanna get better.

Reviews

[Dim Gopnik]

Welcome to the world of false perfections,
Where beauty is seen, in plastic sections!! - I think this should be your opening line

I think, less, commas, are good. (example)

I really liked the theme.