Dancing with the devil

Red like fire
a dance like this
pouty black lips
the nights only kiss.

Flirting with fear
I fall to my knees
I hear the laughter
over and over again,
pounding like thunder
filling my lonely head.

You bring me
to the edge of my soul,
and back again
broken but captivated.
I’m under your spell
fulfilling a need,
I close my eyes
but struggle to see.
I hear you softly whisper,
cold chills
run down to my very core
frozen
I await more.
The lies fall from your lips
one by one
as the clock strikes
its final hour.

I beg the night to fade
from darkness
to a shade of grey,
the story is never told
if the words are never written

 

We only dance in silence.

Reviews

[Master K-tops]

Very good writing. Keep up the good work. I'm very new here too,so please review my wrk too.

[ba_mcfarlane]

Harsh and straight and raw. This piece rocked me some, where I live, where I thought I couldn't be jolted as I am jaded. Wrong.
Some of this is like the screech of fingernails on a blackboard, it works. It doesn't back off. I like this write a ton. Bravo!

[thecreativechic]

wow thank you so very much! I really appreciate your words.