Saturn

i was trying write a song but i wrote a poem instead

 

Saturn

 

Peering inside the telescope

A hidden treasure in space

A planet next to the moon

Without a smile on his face

 

Saturn with a hidden note inside

Taking a detour across

The gloomy skies

Apollo 13 has nothing on me

Showing off his jewelry

To the universe he sings

 

A lane around the top

With a ring on his finger

Grinning with gray holes

in the middle

Mystery aligns with the stars above

Wondering if this planet has people like us

 

Author's Note

holla at your boy

Reviews

[Cece]

a song is a poem
a poem is a song
i always like something
that gives me vision
and vision is learning