undecided fate

The gate way were opened wide

All was cheering inviting me in

Lead through the doors half blind

While the warm breeze burned my skin

Exposing the human I was

And out loud someone screaming

Forgive me god for I have sinned

The screamed faded as the man

Was thrown into a well

And here i was standing in the gate way to hell

My bones pressing on the doors

Smashed it while breaking through the walls

But the hands of the angels pulled me through the gate

While the demons stood there whispering

It isn't too late

And there I was with undecided fate

Jaded torned and inside

a feeling of apathy i tried to hide

Time was running out

Angels were crying out

I closed my eyes and thought

Of every moment of pain 

Every shred of doubt

And in a moment of sublime peace with no resist

I pushed the doors and entered

And all existense ceased to exist

Reviews

[thechosensara]

that must have been scary
i experienced it in an ER room after a suicide

[Mauricio Montoya]

I’ve had dreams with the same affect. Great job, well done.

[thechosensara]

comments would be much appreciated :)