Unpopular Opinion.

Unpopular Opinion.

A Poem by Kimberley
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Random thought.

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I do not believe life has to come to a natural end.
We did not sign up for this life.
It was not a choice, but something that was assigned.
Why should we have to wait for cancer, or a car crash?
Does that not seem silly to anyone else?

I am in no hurry to die, but I will not wait for death to claim me.
Just because we're still breathing, does not mean life is still happening.

© 2017 Kimberley


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How do you know we didn't come into this game choosing to accept certain burdens, ailments and disadvantages? What do any of us remember about pre-birth?
Consciousness does precede physical form.
In any event, your poem is fascinating and that last line certainly rings true.
Lots of dead people walking around.
Welcome to WC, Kimberley!


Posted 7 Years Ago


You're brilliant. Brief, but a lot was said.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Very well said. I agree totally. It makes me sick that some are afraid of life and won't allow themselves the wonderful opportunities that a real life offers. I won't allow the possibility of death to rule me either.

Posted 7 Years Ago


It's really good. I love the last line.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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