A six-word Story...

Was just testing out some new ideas... wanted to see how much raw emotion I could put in 6 words. My English teacher gave me the idea! :)

For sale: Baby shoes, never worn.

 

Heart broken, she watches them kiss.

 

Blood dripping. What have I done?

 

Camoflauge-clad men fight for freedom.

 

Life meaningless, she fights for answers.

 

Noone cares to notice his hidden insanity.

 

Looking down from a place unwanted.

 

I do not belong in heaven.

 

Mistakes dictate who she will be.

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

These aren't meant to be read in any sort of order, and none of them go together :) They're all seperate thoughts!

Reviews

[Chris]

DripDrip Drip... Drip... D r i p... D r i

The light in his eyes - fa d e d...

She almost touched his hand - once.

She never meant to say yes...
... didn't know how to say "no..."

She didn't see the dropped ring.

The blood - spread and soaked... away.

Short stories fit...even when followed in a line.

Hi

[She comes, when I call ..]

Wow, I can't describe how amazing this piece is. I like that you tackled it from different angles.

[Duane Klinger]

Wow! This was creative and powerful. The first one, especially, stood out to me. Nicely done!
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