lost.

my thoughts

lost
when you let go
it's gone
when you want them back
they are lost
you know you had something good
because you feel the pain when you let go
be carefull with love
because when its broken
it leaves a lingering ghost
and no doors left open
an aching pain
and tears
a broken heart holds no eternal gain
im lost and i wander ............alone

 

 

by Jeannie

Reviews

[All faded blue]

VERY NICE a lingering ghost and no doors open,.. nice choice of words.

[Toumei]

welcome to writers cafe! I've been on the receiving end of this poem enough to know that feeling. very heartfelt, honest poetry!