IN THE DEPTHS OF SOLITUDE

in the depths of solitude
sittin in the dark all alone
without a friend in the world
without a place to call home
is it possible for me to survive
with this quicksand all around
gaspin for fresh air to breathe
as the ground floods into my mouth
with every move i make i get pulled in deeper
its suffocatin me, encompassin all sight
screamin at the top of my lungs for help
as i so desperatly try to fight
but in the depths of solitude
no ones around to hear my cries
cus of the barriers ive created
and as the last ray of light hits my eyes
all the visions of my past haunt me
and i begin to realize
ive brought this fate upon myself
by livin this isolated life
 

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[streetrose]

This piece has potential, but needs severe editing in the grammar department.