shoes & love

when I slide my shoes off

I leave one awry

 

and on pretended whims

you nudge them together

every single time

 

that is why

Reviews

[Sr.phil]

Second stanza not great, never start a sentence with "and" common error though.
Unfinished.
Review it.
If this is the way you imagined it, then, well ok.
phil

[Rosary]

unfinished