falling isnt so bad

falling isnt so bad

A Poem by duffin
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love poem for my keira

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time stands still within your quake
my heart it flutters ... this must be fake
looking down " but ill get hurt"
whispered words but heard there not
a step we take on to the edge
looking down " no not again "
whispered words but still there fought
looking down we take the leap
falling fast " nows to late"
whiperd words .... they say alo

© 2008 duffin


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awww i still love this poem!

Posted 16 Years Ago


I like what you're trying to convey, but the spelling and grammar are a bit off...unless that's intentional? Good poem, just straighten out the spelling and grammar if those weren't intentional :)

Posted 16 Years Ago



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duffin
duffin

brownwood, TX



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im dustin duffy .... you can call me muffin ... im from the wrong side of the tracks and from two family popular with the police .... and this ... is my life lol more..

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