chasing the rabbit

chasing the rabbit

A Poem by duffin
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a poem i wrote for a friend heavy into drugs

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the rabbit runs ... the rabbit hides ...
rabbit bites and to make you fly
faster  faster he runs away
 down the hole and on to play
you chase the rabbit but for why he only tends to make you cry
you pray for childhood for petter pan .
but petters gone and pans a man
gone forever from never land
the mind is racing ... eyes wide wake
time is slowing like lifes race
losing time and brain and space
Alice races for the door
its to late her souls been stole
you cant turn back there is no hope .. not when traped in the rabbits hole

© 2008 duffin


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Hmm.. I must say this was very interesting, though may I suggest using a bit of punctuation? Reading this piece became slightly confusing when I couldn't distinguish line from line. Overall this was a good read. ^^

Be Well.
Abigail

Posted 16 Years Ago



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duffin
duffin

brownwood, TX



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im dustin duffy .... you can call me muffin ... im from the wrong side of the tracks and from two family popular with the police .... and this ... is my life lol more..

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