what my heart says!!

imagining for the mate i wrote this,

What my  heart says!!

is someone I need to take care of me

someone who loves me 

the one who gets blushed when I smile

and gets sad when i cry.. my heart need the one 

who starts missing me when I"m not there

n starts kissing me when I'm there

some one to hold me right 

n hug me tight.. 

my heart needs the one who gets angry on silly things''

and smiles on every very little thing!!!

what my  heart says!

is some one i need to take care of me!!

the one who  makes me feel calm

Reviews

[apennylate]

We all need someone to make us calm when the storm comes... Well penned...

[Prashant Bajpai]

thankiew so much for understanding and expressing

[apennylate]

Of course!

[writ rajat]

Letter I should always be capital

[Prashant Bajpai]

sure next time the letter I will be capital

[writ rajat]

Do your work on grammar and technology of poem read poems of others learn from them

[Surya]

If you find them, your life turns around...Hope your wish comes true...I enjoyed it...:)

[Prashant Bajpai]

thankiew soo much

[Mr.Writer]

An emotional and beautiful poem you've written...
We should always listen to our heart...
Keep it up

[Prashant Bajpai]

thankiew soo much

[Mr.Writer]

no problem :)

[Shannon.R]

It's sweet but there are a few grammar mistakes.
'the one who gets blushed when I smile' = 'the one who blushes' or 'the one who gets blushes'
'gets angry on silly things' = 'gets angry at silly things'

[Prashant Bajpai]

thankiew will try to correct the mistake

[Karen John]

So sweet..
Keep on writing..
Its simple and charming..
Hope u find that special one!

[Prashant Bajpai]

thankiew soo much for your pray and the review

[Wajiha Nayeem]

lovely.......i loved your work.

[Prashant Bajpai]

thanks friend for valuable review

[Priyanshi]

SO cute poem...I think every body wants that person in their life...keep on writing.

[Prashant Bajpai]

yeah same is here about me i also wanted to have someone like this and thankiew so much

[Priyanshi]

my pleasure.

[Dave]

Nicely expressed! Don't we all long for such a love?

[Prashant Bajpai]

thankiew dave for understanding and explaining it means alot to me

[Dave]

You are deservedly welcome. Take care - Dave