love

Your every action makz me undrstnd,:-|
that u dnt love me
your fake smile makes me undrstnd,:-P
that u dnt love me
I hope one day u may love me ,:-)
but mine hope mkz me undrstnd,
that u dont love me!!!:

Reviews

[Surya]

Message you tried to show in it is quiet clear....
I enjoyed it...:)

[Prashant Bajpai]

thankiew soo much buddy really thankful

[Surya]

haha, It's all my pleasure..:)

[Priyanshi]

Though short but enough to bring out the message you wanna state...I loved the poem..

[Prashant Bajpai]

thankiew choo much ,,,, the length depends upon the state becoz i always want to write something effective that reader may understand very easily ....i hope you understand

[Priyanshi]

Yeah, very well...keep on writing.

[Prashant Bajpai]

i will surely write more thanks again

[writ rajat]

Very much mistakes in the poem it is not Facebook it is writers forum try to understand don't devalue words

[Prashant Bajpai]

my friend if you know about the writing we write to what we feel from inside and let the toughts be very clear we never write to sell or anything of glory but i will consider your feedback

[writ rajat]

You first clear your mindset

[Prashant Bajpai]

surely i will become better with your review

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

A sad poem a good message you got across
Just need to fix a few spelling mistakes

[Prashant Bajpai]

really thankful that got the concept and i will very keenly working on the feedback with your review