School

This is basically what I feel every morning, Monday through Friday before I go to school.

Why do I have to go
to this horrible prison
that they call
school
I'm teased
I'm taunted
my life is miserable
at school
they all hate me
I don't know why
maybe it's because
I do well in
school

Mom says they're jelous

Dad says I'm better

than them

all the girls

at school

they say to look ahead

I'll be successfull

some ten years

from now

but at the moment

I'm stuck in

school.

 

Reviews

[Lime-Eater]

I like it. I like how you told about the struggles and difficulties of school. I also like how you put in what the mom, dad, and the girls gave motivation to the person telling this poem. I really like it, and I think you should write more poems like this.

[Dream Slave]

In perspective... ten years from that now seems so far away doesn't it? Don't worry though, whether you see it now or not, time flies fast and before you know, you will be out of there wanting to go back. Life just goes like that... The grass is not always greener on the other side.

[Brad]

sounds like middle school for me...it was horrid but beautiful in it's bleakness...a ripe picking orchard of inspirational horror...it makes us...who we are

[Sarah Jane]

The point of veiw from the bullied, I like it. I like the parts of inspiration from family. They sometimes just dont get it

[KAREN]

I could feel your pain how you hate school! BUT be yourself and keep doing well your parents are right! I know it's hard BUT in time it will get better!

[cassandra violet]

this poem spoke strongly in terms of content, however, I do think it needs some work with language and flow.

[sarah]

I hate school too but then again I am home schooled but I still hate it

[Arsenic Nemesis]

This is really good, school IS a prison; thank god I'm in college now! This is very good, shows the bloody horrors of the darn place XD I like it, keep up the good work!~

[futurepast.]

I associated school with prison too when I was there. And it had been the hard times of my life, really. And you showed the things we have to deal with at school.
You just made me remember them all ... nice write.

[how.girls.get.clean]

I love this! school does seem like a prison. you do get made fun of. and then when you get out, you feel so free.