Monster

Another poem from my crazy mind lol

I am not the man I want to be

So much anger inside of me

Rage and anger is all that I know

Has been with me since I started to grow

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I put on a mask that wears a big smile

Yet my anger burns like a funeral pile

Burning my soul with this heated rage

Must not let my monster out of his cage

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For if I do, you won't like what you see

The raging monster that is really me

So I try to keep that part of me in the dark

But my monster is strong and has left his mark

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Author's Note

not finished but like everything a work in progress

Reviews

[Voice]

As someone once said "I feel you." This is really really good and i can relate in a way. Great write!

Voice

[Tina Kline]

Impressive. Yet knowing the Monster is there and acknowledging it's presence will give more control over it but Monsters always leave their mark in one way or another. Outstanding.

[♍ Kirstin ♎]

I like this kinda makes me think of a song called "Monster" by Skillet....