Pure Evil

This is a little poem about my evil step father.

An evil man born from a snake

When he yells the room does shake

He was a monster before his fall

Hit his head now his brain is small

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So much anger spews from his lips

Constant waves hitting the ships

Evil, a monster, a demon I see

Lock him up and throw away the key

****

How can a man be so bad?

Is he calm or is his brain mad?

All I did was stand up to him

Taking shots off the chin

****

He has the power to take my freedom away

Telling lies about me almost everyday

Reviews

[♍ Kirstin ♎]

Ooooooh. Me likey. lol I love the last line so much it just finishes off the poem quite nicely

[lamia]

this is a good poem , good work !

[Frantzuu]

another great poem, awesome piece :D

[Zapster]

Sad poem about a father. Perseverance is the key. Take these troubled times and wrap them around your neck for they will teach you valuable lessons for life. Good poem and good communication, high poet.