Hate

Hate

When your life is full of hate 

You rob yourself of being great 

Poisoning your soul from deep inside

Pushed down deep so it may hide

But then it shows its ugly face

And everyone thinks you're a disgrace 

Don't they know that hate is taught

I guess it's something they forgot

Must rid myself of this poisonous hate

Open up my heart and let love guide my fate

Reviews

[Shade Teller]

I like the rhythm of the poem and the words you used, but I feel that there is so much more that you can add on to such a powerful emotion. Overall still a good poem.

[Jinx's Heart]

I hear you, man. I feel that is all I can say to this. Well written.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

In the second stanza, second line, Your should be you're...great write.