Lost my head

 Lost my Head?

Lost in my head with now way out

Feeling held down, I just want to shout

I know that it's time to heal

Too much emotion I have to feel

My girl is strong but full of pain

She is hiding, deep in her brain

Too many questions I have to answer

Now it's come time I have to ask her

The feelings I have are truly true

Wanting to wait is something new

Looking at her, I see inside

Scared little girl, with lots to hide

Feeling this is something new

I will do anything, I have to do

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Dannee Rafmaninoff]

Love will find a way - Encourage your girl to express her feelings on paper. You can teach her alot. Maybe she is shy but with a bit of effort she will learn to express herself. d.r.

[justjenn_2u]

I like this. Shows your strength to stand by a woman as you give her time to "feel" ready. Very admirable.

I enjoyed the emotion and honesty released here. All in all, good job!

[Emmie]

"The feelings I have are truly true" I think it would be better if you didn't repeat the word true here. Maybe replace it with, 'Promisingly true', or something of the such. Otherwise it is a nice write. Look into that suggestion, It might help you in the future. :) Happy Writing!

[Hviske]

I Really like this sometimes i feal the same sometimes i dont even know who i am or or hate the person that i am ... it might sound weird but i get you . its a great piece i really enjoyed it .