Spitting fire

A very short poem, I wrote when I was mad about something or another. By the end of it I felt much better. Funny how putting your pen to paper can make you feel better :)

 

Spitting Fire

 

Spitting fire from his lips

Like a cannon sinking ships

The fire comes from deep below

Pushed down too long, for it did grow

For when it finally showed its face

All I'm left with is my disgrace

To hell and back I did go

Now it is time to grow

 

 

 

Author's Note

Love to know what you think :)

Reviews

[The High Poet]

I am still not sure about the last line.... I have changed it many times and still there is just something off about it. I was thinking maybe "lots of scars I do show"

[poetic soul]

For when it finally showed its face
All I'm left with is my disgrace

wow..........amazing.........these lines were hard hitting.......it has so many meanings........amazing write......i like yo way of writing.....

:) Smiles,
Poetic Soul

It is a good short poem that Shows that you where mad about something.