A Coin

it's about being left, misused by the person you once loved

When I first met you,

I believed I had found my other half,

You so much resembled what my heart,

Had spent days, praying for earnestly.

 

Your

smile

was

more

than

a charm,

Your words like sweet wine upon my soul,

I’m favored, I believed like a redeemed soul.

 

Little did I know, I was just another coin,

So beautiful to be traded for your pleasure.

Author's Note

Thank you for your awesome reviews

Reviews

[Little Whisper]

I just stumbled cross your poem...I've read it over and over... It's perfectly worded.

[boygene borice]

Thank you so much. Your comment means a lot for me :)

[Little Whisper]

You are very welcome.

[Najam Us Saher]

So painful. The end was really hard hitting. Beautifully expressed the feelings. Good to see your writing after a long time.

[boygene borice]

Thank you so much. I have been off for a while. thank you for remembering me. I'm very grateful :)

[Najam Us Saher]

You are most welcome :)