Courts of your Love

I believe in true love, because that's what builds me up Get more of my work on https://www.smashwords.com/profile/view/theMiracle

There is no place I have found,

With peace undisturbed and eternal,

With so much fragrance and splendor,

Like the courts of your love.

 

Like the wine taken in the evening in the Kings Palace,

So is your love upon my being,

It flows serenely,

Moving me swiftly in atmosphere of ataraxia.

 

Like a flower christened with morning dew,

So has your love replenished my soul,

Furnished me with vitality to move forward,

Like a dedicated Zulu hunter.

 

Like a flower bud guarded by the petals,

To give it a soft and tender luster,

So has your love been holding me,

Modified me into a man I’m purposed to be.

 

Your bosom is like verdure of the meadows in June,

Lulled with greenness of affection,

I have found comfort by laying down,

In that field of your bosom my Love.

 

There is resplendence,

In the courts of your love.

 

© Dec, 2016, Boygene Borice

Author's Note

Your reviews are what build me up. It's an honor to hear from you.

Reviews

[apennylate]

With the dedication of the Zulu hunter, I was dedicated to the first and end lines of your work right off the bat... Fantastic rhyme schemes that leave thoughts flowing smoothly... Your word choice is stellar, as well, and has an almost royal feel to it... Elegantly penned...

[boygene borice]

Thank you for these kind and honorable words :)

[apennylate]

You are welcome, I was honored to read such a work... Not all rhymes are end rhymes...

[boygene borice]

Thank you. Pleasure :)

[Mona]

Poem is really digging deep.
It is pleasent to feel that love.

[boygene borice]

Thank you so much. I'm humbled. Pleasure

[Csimmons]

Wow you know how to put power behind your words . I definitely felt it with every line. I can't wait to read more of your work

[boygene borice]

Thank you so much, your comment has really encouraged me to write more. It's an honor, more of my work you can get also on
www.awesomepoets.wordpress.com

[Csimmons]

I'll definitely check it out you got real talent

[boygene borice]

Thank you. I highly appreciate. Pleasure :)