Arrive

Arrive

A Poem by duff
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Her mind is a pure blue

Dive deep into a sunset

Riding on the train sleep

Headphones soundtrack

Clock in clock out dream

Have you found the end

On the outside again fly

Now you must wake up



© 2024 duff


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this is so cinematic! I like who you are describing.
thank you for your words!

Posted 1 Week Ago


This poem gives me a train journey . Pure blue and a dive deep sunset give me a very positive feeling. Music and dozing, sounds so relaxing. That fly is an irritant on an otherwise pleasant journey. That’s my take duff. Hope you are well. I enjoyed my visit.

Chris

Posted 1 Month Ago



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