The House

House beats you pay the fee

To a place full of sweat dance

Tonight you're free love move

Superstar dj plays your music

An ocean awaits you so do we

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

sooner or later, the house wins.
The Ocean is enticing...free love is enticing...
and the DJ will play our music to keep us drooling at the mouth of success...and then
suddenly the house can take it all away....and we are like a dead fish going out with the tide.
Such an interesting piece, duff.
j.

[duff]

Thank you Jacob.

[Ken Simm.]

This as sensual as mentioned. Hot and sweaty. For such few words there is a lot here.

[duff]

Thank you Ken.