The Ticket

On a busy train so high

Love had an eye on me 

I admire this Berlin sky

Dreaming gray it’s clear

Beautiful kept me in line

Off a platform into future

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I need a train ride. When I was station in Germany a long time ago. I rode the train everywhere. I like the feel of excitement of hope in the poetry. Thank you Duff for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[duff]

Thank you Coyote

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

i visted Berlin in 2014 and fell fr the city. i couldn't find any pot though, that would have made my trip (pun intended). but i cherish those blissful few moment that i get here and there, i don't smoke but i still get my highs from life. vibed with this one, hope to see new works from you soon.

[duff]

Cheers Ern.

[Chris Shaw]

This sounds like a journey full of promise. A ticket to love maybe. Always wanted to visit Berlin. I have a nephew living there.

Chris

[duff]

Thank you Chris.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I think of a line in a movie..."the train moves, the station doesn't"
Maybe love never really moves, it just watches us from above...as we ride the rails of romance searching for it, but always taking the wrong train.
j.

[duff]

I like that. Thank you Jacob