The Temple of Elven Knowledge

A senryu on this picture for a picture contest. Enjoy :) Picture Imagination

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Alas We are here

At the temple of knowledge

To find why you're gay

 

<a href="http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/5711/">Picture Imagination</a>

Author's Note

Picture Imagination Sep 21, 2008 - Oct 31, 2008

Reviews

[Gandré]

this is superb poignant.
You wrote a deep Senryu.
Indeed only god knows why
people are sometimes hetero
and sometimes homo..

Artistic great work, and yes
I noticed the irony behind it.
Even my opinion is that everybody
shall live what he needs to live.
I respect them all.

bravo !!

and HAPPY BIRTHDAY DANIEL !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[TAO]

ROTFLMFAO!!!! What...?!?!? And the reviews are great too...seriously? Listen, this Senryu made my day.

[Stephanie]

Wow, not what I expected! I was expecting some deep amazing knowledge and I get a haiku that made me laugh. You're always a surprise aren't you? Haha. Great piece :)

[Bethany Woody]

A great little quip. You hit the senryu part prfectly. The piece follows the 5-7-5 syllable count yet deals with human emotion or foibles rather then nature like typical Japaneese haiku. Good luck with the contest.

And thanks for the laugh.

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Haiku, well done

[Johnny Westbrook]

that was funny lol

[Celtic Cat]

Oh no you didn't!!!! lol Too frickin' funny!!!! Hopefully, no gays were harmed in the making of this senryu! Or, um, the reading of it!!!

[Lestat's daughter]

Not exactly what I had in mind for the contest.

[Vanessa]

This haiku made me laugh.
:)

[darkgurl]

Like this straight to the point, well said...Kim

[Blackbirdsong]

irreverent as always...LOL