On Ice.

On Ice.

A Poem by the_raven

I watch the glass ease so easily
half empty
a picturesque delusion of happiness,
mocking as the second hand floats slowly by
stuttering at twelve,
my shutters blurring the consequence of who I am

the solitary figure fatigued,
every word dispensed twenty yarns ago
unheard

tears dissipate
desert my sodden sleeve

run faster than every human being
I have touched

my awkwardness laid lame
beneath the star I long for

the temptation of the gutter embraced
childlike
as I dance the forbidden route,
walking the lush green mile hand in hand with you
my eager saviour,
servant to the night we will always be.

© 2009 Michael J. Earnshaw

© 2009 the_raven


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A lot of your descriptions are very surreal... it's really intesting to read, and I found as I reread it, I pictured something different. I like your style.

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the_raven
the_raven

Near Manchester, United Kingdom



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I am a member of the Goldfish Press publishing group which is looking for new, original and exciting talent to submit work for it's first anthology: "The World According to Goldfish". Goldfishpress... more..

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