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this makes no sense.

I want to break free

from these chains

you locked me in

and throw them

in the rain

to feel free.

I want to kiss you

and feel something then

throw you and kill

you as much as I need.

I need to see something.

Need to feel something that

isn't pain.

Need to smile and laugh

and say that its okay

and actually mean it. 

I want to hold you in

my arms and feel you

bleeding till

the apocalypse starts.

I want to end it

before it happens

and then kiss you

in the moon light

when we are 

zombies. 

Throw you into a

black hole.

Drain you out from

your soul

And then smile and say

its okay and say

I'm alright. 

Reviews

[falling_toxic_rain]

Contradicting, which makes it intersting.

[Coyote Poetry]

A interesting poem. A lot of wild desires in the poem. A good life is where we test the boundaries and try to be kind to people. Any violence act is wrong. I have three daughters and take things seriously when it come to family and woman. Words are a powerful tool. In the end we have little to remember us. Our words and actions can allow us to enjoy life or swim in s**t. A interesting poem.
Coyote

[CharlesMonroe]

I love this! :D the imagery is awesome, just wow (: and btw idk if you`re looking for titles but something like "Waiting For The End" orrrr "Life Ending Dreams" might fit :3

[Allie :)]

I love the last stanza!
I can't help thinking that your first stanza would be SOOOOOOOO much better if you only used the word "free" once! Just sayin'!

[WordNerd]

Great Poem, I LOVED it!!

[Kiari Sabon]

i fing love this

[Jessica L. W.]

.... this has to be the best poem I have ever read
GOOD JOB!!

[☯]

A very thoughtful and haunting poem at the same time. The emotions are mixed in an organized way, and you've portrayed the feeling of love, hate, and need. An amazing write :)

[Short.Nerd]

Nice!

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This makes perfect sense. Its depressing though.